Write a Better Company Vision for your Start-up

Written by Dave Bailey

Elon Musk's startup vision

You need an inspiring company vision for where you want your company to go. Follow these steps to improve the way you communicate with your team.

The term vision was always too fluffy for my liking. It conjured up notions of countryside retreats, with campfires, guitars, and mild hallucinogenic drugs. To be honest, I was pretty unclear on what a great business vision actually was.

Then I started investing in startups, and I found myself asking founders to tell me about their ‘big vision’. I wanted to feel as excited about their idea as they were. But I needed more than a fuzzy statement to get me excited.

What makes a vision compelling?

It’s pretty clear that a vision should describe an inspiring future product that will help a large number of people — and make lots of money in the process. However, after hearing many responses to the ‘vision’ question, I noticed that the visions of great founders have something else.

Great founders make their vision seem inevitable.

How exactly do they do this? 

Trends and watershed moments

We’re sold the idea that visionaries like Steve Jobs and Elon Musk can magically see into the future. However, what they’re really doing is spotting emerging trends and extrapolating them by five years. When they describe their vision, it’s their logic that convinces you — not magic.

You don’t need to be a visionary to have a vision. You just need to connect current technology and economic trends to future customer needs.

Back in 1996, Steve Jobs answers the ‘vision question’ entirely with market trends.

Given that trends take place over many years — or even decades — the next question to ask is: ‘Why now?’

Sequoia Capital, investor in Google, Facebook and other successful companies, says it best on their website:

‘The best companies almost always have a clear “why now?” Nature hates a vacuum — so why hasn’t your solution been built before now?’

The best answer to ‘why now’ isn’t a 10-year trend, it’s a recent watershed moment in your technology, regulatory or competitive environment, that enables you to succeed where previous attempts have failed. For example, Uber would have been impossible before the existence of smartphones with GPS. 

Writing a compelling ‘vision verse’

The following model vision statement covers the essential components that great visions have. It will help you convey exactly where your venture could end up, and do so in an inspiring, inevitable and investable way.

Our vision is that ____[performing a key activity] will be as easy as ____[helpful comparison].

Over the last decade, we’ve seen ____[three relevant trends]. These trends are set to accelerate, now that ____[watershed technology, regulatory or competitive milestones].

Imagine if you were able to ____[achieve inspiring outcome(s)] with just ___[minimal user input]. We’ll actually be able to deliver this as soon as we ____[critical areas to develop in the company].

Once this is possible, our addressable market suddenly opens up from ____[current niche customer segments] to include ____[larger potential customer segments].

Eventually, we can eliminate ____[injustice of the status quo]. And that’s a vision we believe is worth fighting for.

Here are some questions to help you fill in the blanks for your company:

  • Performing a key activity — what activity are your customers engaged in when they use your product or service?
  • Helpful comparison — what’s a good metaphor or comparison to get your idea across in as few words as possible? E.g., ‘As easy as calling an Uber.’
  • Relevant trends — what ongoing macro-economic, consumer, and technology trends point in the direction of your vision?
  • Watershed milestones — what has recently changed in your technology, regulatory or competitive environments that previously made your vision impossible?
  • Inspiring outcome(s) — what will customers achieve in the future that would be almost impossible to achieve today?
  • Smallest conceivable user input — what’s the minimal action that customers can take to achieve this outcome in the future? See my essay One-Sentence Product Descriptions.
  • Critical areas to develop in the company — how can you hint at what you’ll need to achieve as a business without going into too much detail?
  • Current niche customer segment — which customers do you focus on today?
  • Large potential customer segments — which customers will you target in the future? Can you quantify them?
  • Injustice of the status quo — what’s wrong with the current situation that your vision highlights . . . and can improve?

Why visions matter

It’s thrilling to get a glimpse of the future. Trends and watershed moments give your vision a solid footing in today’s reality. Plus, researching trends is a great exercise to help you see the bigger picture and define the direction your company will take.

Share your vision with investors, your team, potential customers, and other stakeholders to help them get as excited about the future as you are. Ensure that your company’s success becomes as obvious to others as it is to you.

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Originally published Mar 23, 2019, last updated Aug 19, 2021

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About Dave Bailey

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